增强英语四级、六级写作语句表现力的有效方法
一、避免使用语意弱的“be”动词。 1.把句中的表语转换为不同的修饰语。例如： weak: the trees are bare. the grass is brown. the landscape seems drab. revision:the brown grass and bare trees form a drab landscape. (转换为前置定语) or: the landscape, bare and brown, begged for spring green. (转换为并列结构作后置定语) 2.将作表语用的形容词或名词变为行为动词。例如： 1) weak: the team members are good players. revision: the team members play well. 2) weak: one worker’s plan is the elimination of tardiness. revision: one worker’s plan eliminates tardiness. 3.在以“here”或“there”开头的句子中，把“be”动词后的名词代词变成改写句的主语。例如： 1) weak: there is no opportunity for promotion. revision: no opportunity for promotion exists. 2) weak: here are the books you ordered. revision: the books you ordered have arrived. 二、多用语意具体的动词，保持句意简洁明了。例如： 1. poor: my supervisor went past my desk. better: my supervisor sauntered (=walked slowly) past my desk. 2. poor: she is a careful shopper. better: she compares prices and quality. 三、尽量运用主动语态
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